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Hi i just read your story and I think that it was too long to a reader to reader…. I know many reader will find it nice but for a teenager it will be not….
But It was a nice one to start…
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Morphies Dream posted an update 2 hours ago
“What do you think god really exists or not ??” The boy said . THE MAN replied With a hollow smile ” tell me your opinion ” I guess you woult say somthing like ‘yes he exists, he hear my prayers grant my wishes and all’. “Don’t you feel the same” the boy said. Then let me ask you a question… Read more
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I am a complete beginner. If you find any mistakes, please don’t hesitate to tell me, and also let me know where I can improve.
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Eva Støchkel posted an update 15 hours ago
Say something!
Come on, say something!
Why can’t I just say something?
But what am I supposed to say?
I’ve been sitting with them for ten minutes now, and I still haven’t said anything.
The longer it goes on, the harder it gets.
Why do I have to be so boring?
They probably all hate me.
They haven’t even talked to me.
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Bhakti DUA posted a new post. a week ago
The vampire who can't chooseLong ago, in a dark and silent town, there lived a vampire. His life was empty and lonely, just like every other vampire’s story. One…
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Overall i think you story line is very good. But you can choose some more more defiened words. I hope you will understand1
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I will let me to beta read your book1
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Monicah Mutuku posted a new post. 2 weeks ago
In understood lifeThere was once a girl that care about everyone feelings but during that time the one she cared for never understood her own pain, emotions,and…
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Bhakti DUA posted a new post. 2 weeks ago
AffectionThere was once a boy and a girl, both carefree and a little lost in their own worlds. They met by chance, not expecting anything,…
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Vanduna Boni posted a new post. 2 weeks ago
“The Shadow of the Forgotten Throne”The kingdom of Aleron had not known peace for many years. The wind that swept across its vast plains carried whispers of betrayal, forgotten prophecies,…
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Bhakti DUA posted an update 3 weeks ago
Hi! There, if you wanted to read my long novels you can check that out on web novel I only need your support and your feedbacks as I will be looking forward for that…
I hope you will like those also as my short stories…
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May i have it to read and give a feeddback ?
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Bhakti DUA posted an update 4 weeks ago
“I always wanted to say something, but I could never say it. I always wanted to do something, but I could never do it. Still, there is a hope that one day I will. After all, life is very long.” ✨
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Bhakti DUA posted a new post. 4 weeks ago
A girl...She was a quiet girl who went to school every day. People saw her, but no one really understood her feelings or emotions. Sometimes when…
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